here is feedback Your conclusion is very short – 200 words. Yet it carries 20% o

here is feedback Your conclusion is very short – 200 words. Yet it carries 20% of the marks. Try to reduce text elsewhere and add more to your conclusions. You can see from the scoring criteria what constitutes a good conclusion.You have included some graphics, which is good. How about some quotations from the literature as well? These help enhance the statements you make. Ensure you reference quotations properly.Your main section has no sub-headings. Try to break ups the text with some sub-headings and ensure there is flow between between section with short summary and concluding sentences.improvement needed: 1: add more words on confusion. but be attention on the words limit : no more than 2000 words 2: add some quotations 3: add the subheadings4: proof reading the grammar.
Requirements: 500

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